does your god live
does
your god
exist
in your heart
does
your god
exist
in your mind
does
your god
exist
in your soul
are you
one
you
and
your god
do you
feel
your god
in your heart
do you
see
your god
in your mind
do you
find
your god
in your soul
if
you do not
see
your god
in your mind
feel
your god
in your heart
find
your god
in your soul
you
will never
be with
your god
you are already dead
About Me
- George S Batty
- So Cal, United States
- I am an apprentice writer of short stories and I also attempt a little poetry.
5 comments:
I agree..
Already dead...Thought provoking.....
wow, I loved this! The end especially had a real punch to it.
Yummmm burnt toast and coffee, my favorite! Why doesn't it make me wax poetic? Sometimes I think I'll never write again.....lost in the summer doldrums.
a shout from the mountain tops to those that spent some time with me.
if - your poetry should be printed and printed and printed os the world could enjoy it'
Jeeves - to provoke your thinking is a milestone in my writing. thanks
sarah - I really appreciate your input. "a real punch"...I like that
thanks
Connie - you will write, in your own time. don't push it. the post on your mother was awesome.
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