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7.05.2009

Are you alive?

does your god live does your god exist in your heart does your god exist in your mind does your god exist in your soul are you one you and your god do you feel your god in your heart do you see your god in your mind do you find your god in your soul if you do not see your god in your mind feel your god in your heart find your god in your soul you will never be with your god you are already dead

5 comments:

if said...

I agree..

Jeeves said...

Already dead...Thought provoking.....

sarah haliwell said...

wow, I loved this! The end especially had a real punch to it.

Connie Wolf said...

Yummmm burnt toast and coffee, my favorite! Why doesn't it make me wax poetic? Sometimes I think I'll never write again.....lost in the summer doldrums.

Old Grizz said...

a shout from the mountain tops to those that spent some time with me.

if - your poetry should be printed and printed and printed os the world could enjoy it'

Jeeves - to provoke your thinking is a milestone in my writing. thanks

sarah - I really appreciate your input. "a real punch"...I like that
thanks

Connie - you will write, in your own time. don't push it. the post on your mother was awesome.

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I am an apprentice writer of short stories and I also attempt a little poetry.