Has your soul felt the depths of hell?
Mine has
Has your soul felt the urge to kill?
Mine has
Has your heart been ripped apart?
Mine has
SHE LEFT ME WITH THESE THINGS
Has your manhood been neutered?
Mine has
Have you cried for a lost child?
I have
Have you been alone among thousands?
I have
SHE LEFT ME WITH THESE THINGS
Have you fought to regain your soul?
I have
Have you fought the urge to kill?
I have
Have you fought to mend your heart?
I have
SHE BLESSED ME WITH THESE THINGS
Have you fought to regain your manhood?
I have
Have you fought to keep a child?
I have
Have you fought to overcome loneliness?
I have
SHE BLESSED ME WITH THESE THINGS
HAVE YOU FORGIVEN SOMEONE?
I HAVE
About Me
- George S Batty
- So Cal, United States
- I am an apprentice writer of short stories and I also attempt a little poetry.
12 comments:
if this is the same she in the poem that's one helluva ride.. and a good one :)
Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. She is one in pain and learning to forgive to defeat the pain
The history and future of healing - nice work!
Tumblewords,I have enjoy your writing and a compliment from you is awesome. Thank you
Wow, this is powerful stuff. As I was reading it I kept thinking 'I have too'. So glad I dropped by.
Keith. If you have been there, then you know the kicked in the groin feeling and I feel sorry for your pain . The forgiveness is what released me from the bitterness that was festering in my heart. Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment
G'day,
I just read back through the last few posts here. Loved what you wrote. Must be universal those feelings. I can identify with lots in here well done Grizz.
Linda May
Thanks again for taking some time to spend on my blog. Your kind words are wonderful. I ill e viewing Australia through your site. Write often
I loved the ebb and flow of this and the universal feeling that we have all had those feelings - thanks for sharing your gift :)
Hi OG,
Love the name of your blog. Thanks for coming by BES and yes, I have- forgiven. Thanks for the read.
So powerful!
Nice work :)
Meghan and Susan
thanks for spending a few moments with me. I will return the center.
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