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5.10.2009

Healing

Has your soul felt the depths of hell? Mine has Has your soul felt the urge to kill? Mine has Has your heart been ripped apart? Mine has SHE LEFT ME WITH THESE THINGS Has your manhood been neutered? Mine has Have you cried for a lost child? I have Have you been alone among thousands? I have SHE LEFT ME WITH THESE THINGS Have you fought to regain your soul? I have Have you fought the urge to kill? I have Have you fought to mend your heart? I have SHE BLESSED ME WITH THESE THINGS Have you fought to regain your manhood? I have Have you fought to keep a child? I have Have you fought to overcome loneliness? I have SHE BLESSED ME WITH THESE THINGS HAVE YOU FORGIVEN SOMEONE? I HAVE

12 comments:

floreta said...

if this is the same she in the poem that's one helluva ride.. and a good one :)

Old Grizz said...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. She is one in pain and learning to forgive to defeat the pain

Tumblewords: said...

The history and future of healing - nice work!

Old Grizz said...

Tumblewords,I have enjoy your writing and a compliment from you is awesome. Thank you

keiths ramblings said...

Wow, this is powerful stuff. As I was reading it I kept thinking 'I have too'. So glad I dropped by.

Old Grizz said...

Keith. If you have been there, then you know the kicked in the groin feeling and I feel sorry for your pain . The forgiveness is what released me from the bitterness that was festering in my heart. Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment

linda may said...

G'day,
I just read back through the last few posts here. Loved what you wrote. Must be universal those feelings. I can identify with lots in here well done Grizz.

Old Grizz said...

Linda May
Thanks again for taking some time to spend on my blog. Your kind words are wonderful. I ill e viewing Australia through your site. Write often

Dee Martin said...

I loved the ebb and flow of this and the universal feeling that we have all had those feelings - thanks for sharing your gift :)

susan said...

Hi OG,
Love the name of your blog. Thanks for coming by BES and yes, I have- forgiven. Thanks for the read.

Megha said...

So powerful!
Nice work :)

Old Grizz said...

Meghan and Susan
thanks for spending a few moments with me. I will return the center.

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