the sun and the clouds
tease my mind
with the game they play
will it rain
or will it not
maybe cold or maybe hot
an overt cloud
and a covert sun
take a coat
a covert cloud
with an overt sun
take a coat or maybe not
it is when
they change their minds
and switch at noon
and cause me
to shiver or sweat
and my mind to swoon
it makes me wonder
is that a fair way to play
why do they always want to ruin my day
why do they always want to ruin my day
gsbatty
10 comments:
wonderful take on the prompt - love the playfulness of this piece :)
cheers,
JP/deb
This was great fun. Excellent.
not a fair play! They must announce well in advance!
Enjoyed it.
Very enjoyable!
hugging the stones, I meditate fervently
Nature does seem to play with us. Thanks for this poem!
So natural.. don't we too play like this so many times..with those who don't expect us to.. well liked your take on prompt..
tease me not, let it rain, overtly i would love it...;-)
beautiful take this is...mine is up now...overtly, i mean you would read it...:)
yes, that inbetween... regardless of what you wear it will be wrong... is that the sight of god with humor...
I love the un-guarantee of covert/overt process that confuses the planning mind!
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