Pages

7.10.2010

overt



the sun and the clouds
tease my mind
with the game they play

will it rain
or will it not
maybe cold or maybe hot

an overt cloud
and a covert sun
take a coat

a covert cloud
with an overt sun
take a coat or maybe not

it is when
they change their minds
and switch at noon

and cause me
to shiver or sweat
and my mind to swoon

it makes me wonder
is that a fair way to play
why do they always want to ruin my day
                                              
                                     gsbatty



10 comments:

JP/deb said...

wonderful take on the prompt - love the playfulness of this piece :)

cheers,
JP/deb

anthonynorth said...

This was great fun. Excellent.

Harshad mehta said...

not a fair play! They must announce well in advance!

Enjoyed it.

gautami tripathy said...

Very enjoyable!

hugging the stones, I meditate fervently

SandyCarlson said...

Nature does seem to play with us. Thanks for this poem!

Ramesh Sood said...

So natural.. don't we too play like this so many times..with those who don't expect us to.. well liked your take on prompt..

Amity said...

tease me not, let it rain, overtly i would love it...;-)

beautiful take this is...mine is up now...overtly, i mean you would read it...:)

one more believer said...

yes, that inbetween... regardless of what you wear it will be wrong... is that the sight of god with humor...

Tumblewords: said...

I love the un-guarantee of covert/overt process that confuses the planning mind!

Anonymous said...

Nice dispatch and this enter helped me alot in my college assignement. Say thank you you as your information.

About Me

My photo
So Cal, United States
I am an apprentice writer of short stories and I also attempt a little poetry.